howdy-doo, back yet again. My summer's almost ending and what a real comfort it is for me to see in my notifs that you've completed Underswap!
I'll be trying the other routes at some point, but of course, I went for Sans first! But, first off, loved how you wrote the more minor characters. Cinnamon with the two other little bunnies had very distinct voices and personally a trio I'd love to hang around more, and notably in Snowdin, The Dog shop owner, after buying the stick, I accidentally pressed the 'Shop' option and was pleasantly surprised to see the sweet exchange between my Chara and them. I like that silly dog too. Can't forget about Persona, too and I'd let them pet my head for eternity if I could.
But, focusing on the main story, You've once again made me smile and my heart grip onto whatever organs near it-- I absolutely loved the subplot with Dion and was genuinely caught off guard by the soul scene in the lab (Non W.D route), but all I can say is. wow. that was short, but what a hell of a read !!!! (positive).
Then, Sans!! My scrunkly! LOVE his romance SO much, and I was so ecstatic to see his lieutenant side break at points, and ultimately leading to him being comfortable with us during the walk at the city :3 The flower exchange was super cute too! I genuinely had to walk away from my pc for that because I felt so giddy.
But, seriously, the way you write W.D? sends chills up my spine tbh, absolutely love it!! I honestly don't think I'll get over how you can write him to be so chill to absolutely INTIMIDATING in a few paragraphs (ESPECIALLY. WHEN PAIRED WITH PAPYRUS. looking at the bonus scene!!!).
That's all from me, but really! Amazing work once again!! I can't wait to play your other games when I'm free again :)