Things I liked:
The concept:
The idea of jetpacking around putting out fires is neat.
Things I disliked:
Gameplay:
Gameplay was very simple.
The terrain:
The terrain was very plain.
Things you could do to improve the game:
Add some music.
Give clearer objectives.
Change the animations on the player character.
Synopsis:
For someone so young, making anything functioning is impressive, but you have a long way to go before this game is complete.
Thanks for your entry. :)