There's not much better than a good dwarf story. I really liked the topic and wanted to find out what was going to happen. At the beginning, some of the sentences didn't flow as well as I would have liked being somewhat wordy. The story pace picked up nicely though and kept me glued. The ending was not that of a typical plot and was expecting a little more. I look forward to seeing more of your dwarf stories. Keep up the good work.