Wow, I really really liked it !
I mean I didn't have any kind of expectations, but man I really got into the characters and I love how you talk about the porn industry and sex workers ! Idk, it feels human. And the concept is good !
Also I kinda noticed I was maybe too much into it when I started debating with myself over the qualities of the movies' plots and concept lmao (God I loved Mommy's Boy ! And I'm gay so I took no pleasure in reading it ! That's a testament to how good your ideas are !)
it was less the case with episode 2, but I just explored the hell out of episode 1 so i was getting kinda tired ><
Anyway. Can't choose between the guys, can't get over the loss of the two eliminated candidates, and can't wait for episode 3 !
Hoping my english is correct, please keep up the good work and... I don't know, live a good life ?
Xo
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Thank you so much for the nice words. I'm glad you enjoyed the game.
I might be in the minority on this but if a porn doesn't have a good plot, I can't watch it. Either give me a good reason for these people to have sex or give me well-rounded, consistent characters. So I tried to write the kind of porn that I wanna watch. Also I think it makes sense for a porn competition with a good budget to ask for more elevated plots.
I don't want the game to be too political but I have so much love and respect for sex workers. They are some of the nicest, most progressive, most accepting, most loving people on the planet. For example Xander Corvus is one of my favorite people ever. He constantly does charity streams on his Twitch, he helps out the homeless in his community, he's very open about his support for the lgbtq, he was the first guy shoot a scene with a trans woman on Brazzers and he presented the idea himself, he's been open about his sobriety and he encourages others... a literal fucking angel and he's just one of many. And I hate how sex workers get treated by other people in so many ways. So I'm trying to sprinkle in some of my views through characters that would have views similar to mine. Hopefully that can spark some thoughts on people with opposite views.
Lastly, if you liked Mommy's Boy, you'll like the mini series I wrote for episode 3. It's plot heavy, it explores some interesting subjects and all the sex scenes are integral to the story and it helps move it forward.
Again, thank you for the nice comment. Have a good day.
Yeah, I get that. I remember most of the plots making me laugh, that's one of the reasons I turned towards written pornography.
That's really cool, I don't think most people (me first) see the humans behind porn actors and actresses, and sex workers in general, so big kudos on you for that, really.
Aaw, it's gonna be really cool to read !
By the way, I forgot, but I noticed a few typos ; I hope it's no bother that I report them here, I don't know where I can do it :
A couple of "teh", in Episode 1 I'll make you a star (most of teh time) and in Episode 2 script with Hugo and Yousef (around teh campfire)
Also a couple of "paste", in Episode 1 : Making her like me P2 (way paste that point) and maybe in Episode 2 : Day 2 morning with Damon where I think you meant "keep going at that pace" instead of "at that paste", but I could be wrong, not my native language.
And an "ove" in Episode 2: safe with Hugo and Youssef (i'm ove the fucking moon)
Sorry if you've already corrected them^^`
G'day !