This game is so underrated! I love the story, the graphics, the whole idea, and the style. However, I found myself getting stuck in the rings and unable to move through them properly a lot of the time, and much of the journey consisted of endlessly hitting space and holding my mouse button for what seemed like a very long time. Some more obstacles like the mountain on the way could be an idea to make that feel less lengthy. Finally, I would say the VO of the entity is a little awkward and contrasts greatly with the awesome VO of your sub contact - props to that part of the VO!! This seems like a solo dev project too, you should be super proud congrats. And you should do VO work, with your OG voice!!