Okay, so I was sucked into the story and kept playing until I finished the game. This is the perfect amount of seriousness and comedy that gives the caricatures depth as well as proper character arcs. This continues into the execution of the explicit scenes that you can have with the girls in that (if you turn the option on) you can impregnate the girls and this will have story repercussions. Also while on the subject of the explicit scenes they don't feel forced in, unlike some other 18+ visual novels that I played. In terms of this writing, it's one of the best I played there as this is a story with erotica rather than the more common erotica with, very little, story.
The only issues I have with the game are that: 1. the Gallery is inaccessible from the Main Menu/Title screen, and 2. many of the minor or background characters you'll see use the same general character design with very minor changes to the model textures, which makes it hard to tell if they are foreshadowing by characters being in the same space or if it's just someone else entirely.
But even with those two shortcomings, I would still give this game a perfect 10/10.