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Alright, decided to play through 0.1.

First of all I'd like to congratulate what you've done so far. Yeah, the game's a little bearbones, but this is only 0.1, so I'm sure it'll get better. I also apreciate you just coming out and saying that this won't be 100% the same as the LN.

Now for what I'll criticize: you should make the canon names the default option, rather than asking us to give everyone a name. It's also better to name everyone at once rather than as they show up (maybe it could be part of the options screen)

I also got errors twice as I played. Not sure if it has been fixed on 0.2, but they both happened not long after "the AI" showed up if it helps any.

There's not much else to talk about, so this is it for now. Again, good job so far, I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Shousaka941 year ago(+1)

I appreciate your comment. I would like to know in what aspect you find it rough, so that I can correct it as best as possible. About the error you mention, you are the first one that happens to it. Can you tell me where exactly it happens? And about names, I can't use any canon names in-game. Because the characters are just a parody of those created by Koshi Tachibana. So using them would get me into a copyright problem which would cause the removal of the game. I will be attentive to your answer.

Mega143431 year ago

Both errors happened when Maria showed up. But I was able to continue through the game by simply pressing ignore, so it's probably something with less importance (maybe an image load).

What I find rough about the game is that there's not much to do, during the morning you go to Tohka's room, at night you sleep. And you only get 1 action per timeslot. It's good enough for now, but if this was a finished game it would be extremely boring.

I'm not sure what, but you should try to do something to avoid the feeling of repetitiveness. I don't know if you're planning to do more than just the main spirits, but it would be unbearably boring to just "go to X's room -> sleep -> go to Y's room -> sleep" over 10 times.

Shousaka941 year ago(+1)

Ok, it's the first time I've been told about a mistake in Maria's appearance. I will try to solve it. And since I only have two girls in the game at the moment I have to level the actions by time interval. These actions will increase as more girls are introduced. As well as new events for each one. I am aware that at the moment it is tedious. And I will look to solve it in the future. I appreciate your comment. It is very helpful to me!!!

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