well, it isnt bad but:
-there should be something like gradually increasing H scenes, like with this guy in tavern, in my opinion it shouldnt be blowjob bot something like letting him grope her
-it is too short
-i would love to see gloryhole scenes
-with enough lust u could work as bartender where drunk customers gradually do something more erotic or with high lust work as a prostitute
overall not bad but could be better