Uwah!! I love the art and plot! However, since I criticize things as well. You could improve choices that could lead to something excited. Meaning there need to be more interactions with the love interests. Take Pascal in example. There should be choices in the future that could lead him to instead heading for Chloe, he would go for the Protagonist. Well, in a pace that wouldn't make the plot all wonky and what not. And then maybe Pascal would have a mental battle to see who he actually likes further in the story. Depending on the choices the Protagonist chooses. That's all from me, cya and sorry for criticizing you guys. I just want the game to improve and have better interests from others. I'm known to criticize, and sometimes... Nm. I'll stop explaining and say thanks for making this game a game full of great potential!