This is going to sound crazy, but I think you should edit your dialogue and give the characters fake historical accents and some fantasy flair.
You look ready! It is a strange feeling to be sending you off to danger as your sworn bodyguard… Take care not to ruin the hide though. Lord Woadstrider could craft a fine piece of armor from such a tough one.
Becomes:
Ye seem ready, princeling, tis a strange feeling taeh be sending you off tha´ battle as your sworn protector. Take care not tha´ ruin the hide, lad. Lord Woadstrider could craft aeh mighty piece of armor from such a tough beast.
The graphics on the missions are very nice and I appreciate all the animations. I get what you meant with “warcraft3” now, similar map structure, I think. It has been many years since I played that game.
requests:
- Make a pretty textbox and make it look like wood paneling with some artisan borders.
- Put the controls and such in the description of your project, I am stupid and forgot them immediately
- Consider using right mouse click instead of left for movement.
- Small text popups, like speechbubbles, over characters in mission maps. “These foul hounds shall taste my blade!”
- Just make the camera follow you, and keep the wasd if you want to look ahead a bit.
- Not entirely sure if this is a good idea, but what if clicking on an enemy repeatedly while you are engaged in combat deals a very minor amount of damage? Could possibly be fun.
- This needs “game of thrones-like” 80s synthesizer music.
- Instead of picking up drops by clicking they should be sucked in with a satisfying noise. “Aha, this eve we shall feast on the spoils of war! DONG bell sound."
Bugs:
- Game crashed while I was fighting the bats in mission 1.
- It gets a bit fucky when you have a large amount of troops and some of them get stuck on trees.
- Game crashed in mission 2 as well, while “chewbacca” was part of the combat.
- Game crashed as mission 2 was finishing, this might not be stable enough yet if you want people to get engaged in testing.
Thoughts:
- That glow-up when you go from one prince hunting in the woods to the big ass gang bout to fuck shit up.
- You are definitely on to something cool, but you need to make this more stable, otherwise testing it will be hell for other people.