I have to say that I am very impressed, especially considering that this is your first VN. I absolutely love what we've seen of Jack so far! He's tooth-rottingly sweet, with a hint of sinister that comes from being a member of a species with a reputation for unhealthy (by human standards) courting habits. I always love seeing fiction that tackles the fair folk, and so far I am loving your depictions of them! I'm also just loving the vibe~ there's something very unique about the style of this VN, which I love to see!
Congrats on publishing your first chapter! I can't wait to see where you take us next~