whoa, sounds like you're getting way into the code side of twine, and with that concept I'm really excited to see how your game progresses :D
So glad I stumbled apon you're dev blog, I wasn't really sure how to approach outlining a twine game. I am not a writer by any means- so the 'loose outline in-game' that you posted never occured to me XD. I have the sloppiest .txt file of nonsese right now!