Master was right, huh? Revealing the truth only at the end did made the game a lot more interesting and made for a good cliffhanger!
Me saying this may not sound so nice, but I’m unsure if I have interpreted the game correctly, I might replay it soon. I did find it intruguing and I enjoyed the psychdelic storytelling, specially the use of the quick videos—those brought made me considerably more immersed in the story.
However I disliked the 2nd person narration. I think it’s hard to imagine myself as the protagonist of the story, to which I think a 1st person narration would work better for the game. Though this is merely my opinion and other players might feel different from me (I’m saying this not to be kind, but because as a writer, I constantly take criticism at face value while I not always should.)
Anyway, those were my thoughts. If you are anything like me, you will open your itchio dashboard twice a second to check for new downloads, good luck on those initial days of release. Hopefully your game gets the recogniztion it deserves.
Sincerely,
Epschy