The storytelling is indeed the strongest side of your game. The begining is fascinating and i was driven to know the whole story. Also dialogues written very well my friend.
Visuals are also great: unified, atmospheric graphic style with wisely chosen color palette. Well made.
Unfortunately i wasn't able to finish it, after I got high jump and meet stroner foes game started to be too hard. If you want to still work on this project, please consider polishing movement and jumping system. I felt slight delay when i was changing direction while moving. Also the jump was to fast, it was hard to navigate.
I would really want to try your game with this movement changes, because where it comes to atmosphere and story i think it has great potential! I will gladly follow you and check the updates;)