imo the writing on this is too simplistic n lacking depth for me to be invested. i get yu want to avoid purple prose, but this dialogue reads like one ov those stock image myon books yu read in middle school
the lesbophobia isn't helping, either. (theres a part that stereotypes lesbians as man-haters. i get that ozaki studios aren't/isn't a lesbophobe, n that it was probably juz bad wording n characterization but we gotta watch out for bigotry in game developers namsayin?)