That was sweet. I can't recall when was the last time I saw a visual novel on a jam so that's pretty unusual too.
The art is super beautifull and the story itself is also very endearing. I also love your extra little message at the end, felt very human :>
I don't know how to give much more feedback than just that tho, as I said Visual novels are quite unusual lol, But I certainly wouldn't mind a world with more of them.