If you don't care about my writing, don't hold back...
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Honestly, it look very AI generated. After checking out some of your other games I realized that might just be your writing style.
I do actually like such pseudo philosophical walls of text, but more so in video form (Exurb1a is a good example).
It's especially annoying if you expect the characters to give you info about what you need to do but they just go on and on about something completely different.
Having a white background to make the text more readable would go a long way as well.