Hi Kalen! I must say your key points are quite convincing. Your careful selection of data and research papers shows a strong attention to detail. The idea of game mechanics intertwined with psychology and sociology sounds pretty intriguing. I'm really excited to see how the differences in data between "work" and "one's true inner self" will enhance the gaming experience for players. It'll be interesting to see how you represent the varied in-game reactions stemming from players' different choices.