It's impressive how much variety you got into the environment, and yeah, the pulled out camera is a neat hook. I think the main thing it's missing is some positive feedback. I ended up only playing about 20 minutes because I felt kinda lost and unsure of my goal. I'll post my playthrough when I upload it.
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yeah I understand your problem, the game has 5 endings that take different routes and I had trouble explaing it in the gameplay. I tought the first npc directions would give some hint but I ll have to rework it. By the way have you found the druid cove? From there I kinda made clear what is the main quest. Very courious on your playthrough :)
Damn. I wouldn't have guessed it was that extensive from how far I got. I literally just made it into the first gate, spoke to the hungry guy, picked up a letter tile in that one room, walked into the next room, turned on the ferris wheel (rode it a couple of times) and spoke to the Witch about upping my reputation and getting the better jump. That's as far as I got.