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Cool game! A simple concept, executed well.

I think the sounds, music and visuals all worked well together to produce a cohesive, good-feeling game. I appreciate that you can change the conveyer speed diegetically through the lever.

A few comments. The giant wall of text at the start explaining everything is functional - it does give the player all the information (story exposition and mechanics) that they need, but dumping it all as a wall of text is usually not very palatable to most players. You could try breaking it up into a few smaller boxes, or introduce the ideas gradually. You can also try trimming out the story exposition altogether. As much as I enjoyed the cat mafia (nyakuza?) context, being told that information in smaller, digestible pieces would've helped.

Also, I was initially confused about grabbing the correct parts from the bottom bins for the gun order. This was mostly because I just saw text like 'barrel' or 'optics', but if I saw the actual gun parts it would've been easier for me to register.

Last thing- I tried submitting a score but didn't get any feedback after that. No leaderboard, and no chance to retry the game. Might be a transient bug with LootLocker so I definitely won't count that against you, but you should know that it happened and other players might experience it.

Overall nice game - simple concept, executed well in all its elements. Nice job

yes lootlocker wont work with webgl but i had no time to fix it

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was it by any chance an error involving MacFsWatcher? I had the same problem when building but commenting out the line "using MacFsWatcher" worked for me 

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yes i commented out this line at first second after importing lootlocker sdk, i had another problem h after response of lootlocker employee i was able to fix it

organizer approved live hotfix so now working leaderboards in game!

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thank you for such detailed feedback! The training was done in the last minutes, so we didn’t have time to divide it into blocks haha, the training is better formatted in the game description