Very nice game !
I really like how the ghost was portrayed throughout the story, and the "Ghost Wiki" page on the computer, however i have some criticism to make (in good faith):
Problems:
- The lack of directions is a bit problematic, especially in the computer section, where no direction is given towards what should be clicked on or even searched, even if we can eventually find the page we need to find by clicking every link.
- I'm not aware of how Renpy works or if it is an engine limitation, but the movement could be improved if it was grid based instead of free movements that leads to guessing which pixel interacts with what.
The Good Stuff:
- Very gay and very wholesome, gay ghost is a big + from me
- Cute artstyle !
- Lesbian flag pattern on the walls :D
- Baking ! (i am biased, i love baking)
- Congratulations on making a game in such a short amount of time !
Suggestions:
- The font could be more stylized to fit the game more, you can find some on Google Fonts or Fontesk (free fonts !)
- More directions, as i previously said, it's a bit hard to understand what i'm supposed to do sometimes
I hope you continue on making such good games, and i wish you good luck !