I'm so, so glad to hear it went well! That made my day.
Really great tip about changing the order of the pages to make player sheets and a GM sheet; It didn't even occur to me how easy and effective that is...
I know it's hard to get feedback. 😅
I've been running a lot of oneshots at the local culture house, and last time I ran a Dark Souls L&F hack. The (few) extra rules in a 24XX game made character generation a little slower, but led to some choices based on specific character skills later on.
The "quest" tables were good, and the best part of most 24XX games. Love me a good table. :3