Thank you so much for taking the time to read and provide feedback on my story.. It's my first time writing a story, and your insights are incredibly helpful. I'll use your advice as I continue to develop my storytelling skills.
No problen at all
I actually forgot to mention something:using the 1st person for the protgonist allows you to use the 3rd person for other characters perspective if you so wish
I will keep an eye on this project, looking forward to a continueation
