Loved:
- Music provided a lot of creepy atmosphere
- Pixel graphics and detailed animations
- Story and strong adherence to theme
Consider the following:
- Adding more options and endings. I know this is a game jam version, but definitely want more endings.
- Be careful not to break the mood. I felt certain options broke the illusion by acknowledging the player or the game within the story. When this happened during my playthrough, it soured my experience.