I feel this one has a lot of potential, in terms of aesthetics and atmosphere. The liminality of the setting, the old-school feel of the pictures have something really creepy about them. But I think it would deserve some soundtracks, and also more detailed descriptions and dialogues. As a player, there's not enough time to really get caught in the vibe. I was hoping for a good jumpscare with the monster too, so that was a bit frustrating ;) But I think there are a lot of great ideas there and I was definitely intrigued !