I left the cons and pros in your RPG Maker Forums page. But i'll bring them here.
Pros
- Graphics are gorgeous. There's a lot of effort on it!
- Voice acting in battle: Awesome, it's not jarring at all!
- Busts: Pretty impressive to have a bust for every single character!
- Custom scenes: From status to save, amazing look!
Cons
- Battle System: You're using Mog's LMBS, so i know what goes in this. Perhaps it may only be me but isn't combat a bit slower?
- Map Movement: It's too slow. The inability to go in 8 directions made me a bit stressed.
- Footstep sounds: at 5 seconds i wasn't having it and turned the volume down. Maybe lower the volume a bit?
- Writing: I can't say anything about the story but about the writing itself, there's a lot of mistakes. Although I'm sure it's because english isn't your first language? (I do the same mistakes here and there too)
Here they are! Keep your efforts up! It's good!