It looks like your team put a lot of heart into this, and it ended up being a lovely entry despite cutting off at the end there so suddenly. I hope you all have the time to continue to make the game come to it's full realization!
My favourite parts: The background and character art, it was very well done! I also loved the UI, especially the opening menu. The story was intriguing and I was excited to meet all the different characters.
My suggestions: I'd get an editor for the writing, it was a lovely start to the story but there was a few mistakes that took me a second to understand. There were a few glitches I came across I know when doing these jams it's a time crunch but testing is really important.