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Thank you for the very detailed review!!

-The soup comment was interesting! I actually googled first whether you "drink" or "eat" soup, and I am aware of the differences across cultures and languages, but decided to specifically follow English grammar-wise for his not-so-thoughtful rant XD

-About the UI, you are very right :") As stated in my devlog, I'm also not proud of it, and due to time limits I had to use a software I'm already comfortable with, that is not really designed for Visual Novels ;;

Edit: forgot to mention, you can make the text appear faster by long-pressing the enter key!

I'll definitely take your review into account! And thanks for playing and getting all the endings! 

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You’re welcome! And it looks like I can long-press the left mouse button too. Some entries require me to use the mouse for choices and the keyboard for advancing text, but this one at least lets me advance the text with the mouse and make choices with the keyboard too. And I noticed that you formatted the text a bit like subtitles (i.e. I think you manually inserted linebreaks so that I wouldn’t see the start of a word appearing on one line and then not fitting on that line and having to fall unto the line below).

And since I didn’t end my review with a conclusion, here’s one: What I liked most was the story with the educational bits (and the logline too), and what I’d suggest improving would probably be mentioning the thing about long-pressing enter/space/LMB to make the text advance faster.