Ahoy there!
I really enjoyed playing through your game, and feel happy to read through the comments that your team will aim to complete it in the end. The story and the established genre are very strong elements to this project - its easy to follow the adventure, the characters personality are clear and I enjoyed reading through this story on my stream!
I felt that something that could improve the team in the future is having an editor on board to keep the writing tidy and feel from grammar mistakes and typos.
The art, the design... All of the team members clearly worked very hard to make a solid demo here.
Did you enjoy the Spooktober jam? Will you be giving it a go next year too?
All the best,
Ocelot