Ahoy there!
I liked the dialogue in this one! I thought it carried a lot of good humour and nostalgia for the past. You made a very clever point and click - candy search system, and I love all of the art you've incorporated in this.
Next time you submit a game, I highly recommend you add more screenshots to entice more folks to play your game. Why not show off your backgrounds and the dialogue a little bit? There's so much art you've managed to do for this game, it's quite an impressive feat.
All the best,
Ocelot.