Hi, found some typos and just wanted to let you know about them. Idk if that is helpful at all, but I've included some info about where to find those mistakes:
"[[She were]] under surveillance..." -> meeting with Kosta and August
"We both know her well enough to know that if she truly wanted to reach me "she would have, surveillance or not." -> issue with the quotes -> meeting with Kosta and August
"Exactly." They suddenly click their tongue, almost playfully. "You [[alwways]] knew how to assess a situation, Cora. I admire that about you." -> at the beggining, in car with August
You cringe at your own [[[choice or words.]]] But it makes Kosta stop and look back at you, waiting for you to continue. -> Kosta's route
[[He]] snaps back into focus, his gaze glued to you. -> the formating is wierd in game, the "He" is in different line that the rest of the sentence, it's in Kosta's route
He tries not [[ot]] laugh and you chuckle.-> after rescuing the girl whose name I do not remember with Kosta
Great work btw, can't wait to read more