Making a text-based quest is nice, but personally I think it's a bit too "text-based". I feel like this game would have gone with images of actions happening in the moment. But here is the work with the text is really cool, all these effects look interesting, more perhaps I would add the sounds of what is happening, for example, when the cat meows, you can do that in the background was heard meaukonye, in my opinion, it spotsopstvulya would immersion.
Although I do not particularly like this kind of games, in general it was interesting to quietly immerse in the story