Really enjoyed the art style for this one, that alone mixed with the writing made me want to stick through to the end. It got a little repetetive after the first go through (typically happens with jam games) but the characters made me want to get to each next bit. I would have liked some music maybe in the gameplay segments and a list for the controls (took me several minutes to find how to continue dialogue) but overally I quite liked what I saw here and I hope you can expand on these characters in some way