This is very interesting take on Thai Ghost, very detailed art and clear aesthetics.
On gameplay side I think the core gameplay is there, could be improve on Post-Jam version.
2 suggestion that I can think of is
- Ingredient list is not away visible, so player need to memorize or spend time flipping menu book.
- each customer can order with special request, e.g. some may prefer very spicy so player need to input more chili
here's my full playthrough in English.