Well, I didn't expect to die on my first choice so that was funš. On the second playthrough I manage to survive my first day but Razor dies. This was a fun to be honest.
There were grammar errors here and there of course. Also some sentence which didn't make sense, one of them being: "You both keep extreme focus on the eye as you continue towards the research node. However, this causes Razor to not notice a puddle of blood on the floor and he trips." How does one trip over a puddle of blood?