Oh dear that pesky Hitchhiker strikes again. Gripping well writen text. It was a dreadfully quiet experience and I always feel my eyes drooping and my patience waining if there is no sound. It really missed it. It has lots of merit though.
I agree it definitely needs sound; I'll be working on adding it after the voting period! I'm not gonna lie though, I've never done sound before so I'm a tiny bit frightened to try haha.