I’m extremely impressed! There’s a really nice atmosphere to it and the writing is really strong. You tell a lot about the characters with a few lines of dialogue and the set up is solid. I think the ending was a bit lacking, it felt a little rushed but that’s my only real issue. The art is beautiful and I wish there was more of it in the game! I’d buy an art book/zine of your art. The riddles and little challenges were fun and creative. I like it when visual novels test me to make sure I’m paying attention, it makes me more invested in every little detail. I did a play through of it but itch doesn’t let me embed yt vids for some reason so here’s the link https://youtu.be/8LlsX-G2_UQ I left some links to some games you might be interested in checking out in the description. I hope my feedback is helpful!!
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Hello, and thank you very much for the insightful feedback! It was interesting looking at my game under a critical lens (˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ (And yes, I did watch the whole thing haha, it wasn't awkward and you were clear! I'll have to check out the games in the links sometime.)
I'm also really flattered to hear you enjoyed the art! ( still processing that someone would buy an art book/ zine (just looked that up) wowowow) I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the atmosphere and experience. Thanks again! ⸜( ´ ꒳ ` )⸝
(although I may be slow to respond since uni work piling up, feel free to approach me on twitter/discord!)