Story is pretty funni. The artstyle is really unique, fits the comedic nature of the game. First time I've seen smth like it.
Checkpoints are well-placed; there's always one where it's needed.
The movement is kinda hard tho, purely because of the momentum feature. Was hard to traverse the narrow spiky tunnels, considering there's a breath timer. Maybe smth can be done to it so it's not as annoying?
The 1st area was pretty meh. It went by too fast because of the arrows, making the path easy. Only way someone would ignore the signs is if they wanted to explore more, like me. Removing the arrows would be great, imo
In any case, nice short game.