Good art.
Good narrative voice.
The story and presentation (especially being in first person, and sometimes slipping into a soft second person?) reminds me of a semi famous little comic about an angel talking to two women who ask it extremely intrusive questions while it tries to focus on them despite perceiving everything in the area down to terrible details. That sort of altered way of living and seeing the world is a really fun way to explore the main character, kudos.
Good bass on the bedroom song.
(Ending spoilers)
The story is great. I like the angel thing as straight up narrative, and it works just as well as (what I'm guessing is) trans allegory, of some kind. I like the strange mixed pain and relief finding a date seems to bring, the ambiguous note it ends on. I like the final scene, how we see the character flex her agency a little for the first time, and then immediately jump to knowing what she wants and exercising ultimate and final agency to spite the strange man.
This game really digs down into some interesting, unnerving and sort of cathartic emotion. I wish I had more to say but it's not all processed yet; I'll be thinking about this one for a while. Thank you Indigo Children!