Super well written. I like how the work dove so deeply into areas of squick that are often ignored; it's become a bit passé to write about piss and sweat and blood, and the focus here on skin cells, on crevices within the body, on scabs and earwax, it made it all gross in delightfully fresh and interesting ways.
The story captures some of the isolation of staying on campus over the summer quite well, also.
I like the audio and presentation, the section dealing with the madonna was cool. Well done Dermomaniac!