As things that aren't games go, this is well done. The writing is pretty up to par with the light novels I've seen. In only a few sentences, the characters feel like characters, and not the usual stilted writing I see in a lot of jam games. Whoever wrote this knows what they're doing. Well done (Though you may want to try making a game next time :P)
P.S. It's spelled "awful" (also, I have no idea what the second dialogue option was supposed to say)