I recorded your game and another suika like game from this DD with commentary, because a lot of the feedback is applicable to both games. I hope the video helps you improve the game.
DD53 feedback videos:
Demo Day 53 videos of games starting with letters from A – J:
https://mega.nz/folder/DdVwTYAK#ZsxVSpsd5L2yvgaqtcvBsA
Demo Day 53 videos of games starting with letters from K – Z: