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I've been greatly enjoying this game. The animations are great and out of all the characters I've met so far, I've really liked all of them. My only main issue with the game really is that it seems in need of a good proofreading. There's some typos here and there, but mainly the wording is kind of awkward in a lot of places. It's mostly readable, but sometimes the phrasing is a bit... odd.

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Really? I didn’t notice anything like that... Perhaps because english is my third language (or fourth, not sure already)

There's quite a bit, but like I said, for the most part it's harmless, gets the point across, just comes across as a bit awkward. There was one instance where I'm not sure what it meant, but that's about it. It's a lot of apostraphe'd words where using the two separate words would sound more natural, or the tense being the wrong one. Not really things being spelled wrong, just not quite the right words in the right places.

I didn't catch it either... and it would be because English's my second language😅

Ahh... I guess I found something. But it's harmless as you said.