It's nice to see that you changed the choices bar (kinda unnecessary but good improvement nonetheless) still the saves issue hasn't been solved yet which is very fine by me since I always read from ch1 every time you update. And every dem time it's very satisfying to see tomomi getting burned by akemi and would like to thank her for the assist XD but, who let her cook though? Anyways Ch20 is one of the highlights on Book 2 even better than kanehana's arc (it's fire By the way)
Anyways, I just finished Ch23 And... It's kinda underwhelming(in terms of impact) but it's very good in terms of story building, although nothing much happening other than R-sayumi and MC's time with each other(enjoyed this part) . The pool part saved it.