This was really fun! And i'm impressed by the amount of content you produced in 48h.
Loved the way you used your main mechanic. And you adapt the "no" duration to the longer of the text and the decision to make, it's cool!
I got killed by the cop the first time. Then the second run was... really fun and weird I guess?
I'm a bit curious: did you inspire from series characters? Some characters reminds me something (Morgan from Chuck?)