Oh no worries. Typos are bound to happen, but if nobody points them out then they can be easily over looked. Proof reading and all that and I'm sure it's easier for us to see them than you can while looking at all the other stuff you have to put together. Those ones just stuck out to me because it was kinda funny. "My nipples are so sensible." made me chuckle, but in a fun way not a 'this is bad' kinda way. If that makes sense.
As for the images, honestly, I can only tell day and night. But that might be my own issues, I'm not color blind but my color recognition isn't what it should be and they tend to blur together. Like we have a blanket, my wife swears is green, but it's gray to me.
And thanks so much for listening about the wait thing! It'll be very nice to pass time like that!