this is so good! i was skeptical at first; mysteries don't typically mesh with me unless they are written really well. but thats just the thing; the story is so good! i love how all of the seemingly insignificant details end up coming together. and its not in a jarring way either, the plot seems to develop very naturally, and i even think i've picked up on a hint or two that hasn't been touched on quite yet. the art is pretty good too, it has a unique style compared to other VNs which i find refreshing. the characters are unique in believable ways, and have personalities that work together very well. i cant wait to see what you do with Lawrence, he seemed pretty cool from the brief interaction we had. overall, i'd give it a solid 8.5/10 so far, cant wait to see what happens next!