I really like the idea of using a simple concept like making yourself ramen, and taking advantage of how vulnerable you may be while cooking. I think you have some real talent for horror creation, and I look forward to see more from you. I think I would have liked to see a bit more tension and rising action, but overall it was a nice short game that ended up startling me.
PS. I like the secret ending, it caught me completely off guard. Who would've guessed that the game would end by the simplest mistake.
Keep it up.