I thought giving people what could you do is a little rude but if it's fine I'm going to start on it, because I have a lot of stuff to say to the developers about the games I tried so far :
That's better. If you're looking for a feedback formula, this is what I tend to use:
The problem + why it's a problem (most important part) + what you might do to fix it
Also, try to do criticism sandwiches so that you always start and end on positive notes:
complement + critique + complement
I appreciate your effort, expect a review soon!