I LOVED this! So far I have only done Gruff's rout, and it was soo good! I can't wait to see what else you have planed.
Also, I noticed several mistakes in the writing, a little too many to remember, but I did remember that you confused cum with come. And also, there was a glitch that caused the line after you wake up to repeat. If you want, I am willing to help out with the writing and play testing.